Writing poetry is a lot like the cycle of water.
The cycle of water is a lot like the Torah.
Even though my mom spent years pushing me into synagogues and correcting my Hebrew, it wasn't until I turned nineteen and picked up a nasty nicotine habit that I really started to believe in G-d. I don’t like to romanticize smoking, but there's something about it that feels intimately religious. I mean, you could say the same thing about brushing your teeth every morning. Lorca says the true struggle is with duende and that duende won’t appear if /he/ can’t see the possibility of death. Maybe G-d feels the same way. In the Torah, G-d’s love for humanity is the strongest when we’re on the brink of destruction. This is most apparent in the story of Noah’s Ark, where G-d sends a great flood as an act of divine retribution to cleanse humanity in preparation for rebirth. I am fascinated and disturbed by Noah’s story, especially as it is nearly impossible to find a creation mythology that doesn’t include a great and destructive flood. Is it really fair to kill everyone and everything in order to start again? I’m not sure. It reminds me of the character Sethe in Beloved who can only protect her daughter from slavery by killing her. It seems that sometimes, the love G-d has for humanity is too thick.
After the flood, Noah and his family survive and procreate. G-d promises to never ever again bring such a violent end to G-d’s creations. G-d even sends Noah the first rainbow as a sign of their covenant. Throughout the Torah, the motif of heavy rain and long droughts are repeated to represent G-d’s power and conflicting emotions. When G-d is pleased with the Israelites, G-d sends rain. If the Israelires are in the wrong location, G-d will put them in a drought to make them move somewhere else. Sometimes, G-d will even send bread raining from the sky so the Israelites can eat. Rain is necessary for survival, but too much rain can also destroy life. It’s a strange cycle that must be perfectly balanced in order for life to continue.
Water moves continuously through the earth and the atmosphere.
From evaporation to condensation to precipitation to runoff to evaporation again.
Many of my poems use images of rivers, rain, clouds and deserts to represent the duality between and the spherical nature of birth and rebirth, but the two poems that directly address these themes are “Three Recollections on my Encounters with Clouds” and “Three Recollections on my Encounters with Droughts.” The first poem, “Encounters with Clouds,” is really much more about droughts than it is about rain -- “in the field/beyond half torn barns/and barbed-wire fences/the roots of an oak tree/reach for the frail river.” Conversely, “Encounters with Droughts” has much more to do with rain -- “Videos of river/banks bursting/like veins/Shattering roads/barging into homes/carrying cars five miles/down the stream.” The two poems are in conversation with each-other, and they speak on both the destruction that is inherent with (too much) rain and with (a too long) drought. But both poems also end with hope and renewal. “Encounters with Clouds” ends with an approaching rainstorm on the eve of Yom Kippur, “a september nightmare/- rain landing on hot asphalt /cracking glass/brief drops of jewels -/the sounds of a new year.” The possibility of both resurrection and annihilation hang in the air.
Three Recollections on My Encounters with Clouds
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By day the Lord went ahead of them
in a pillar of cloud to guide them on
their way and by night in a pillar
of fire to give them light, so that
they could travel by day or night.
Neither the pillar of cloud by day
nor the pillar of fire by night left its
place in front of the people.
Exodus 13:21.22
(i)
We were lost
together
in the desert
with only the
sky’s silhouette
like a diamond
on the brink
of combustion
to distract us
The clouds hung
above our heads
without fuss and i
without commiting
themselves
Growing large
and melting together
casting shadow some
that shielded us
from the angry heat
of the mid-summer sun
We danced with
the clouds as
we were
continuously lost
in the desert
I thought i saw
rivers tucked
into corners
Visions of
fireflies or fairies
dancing together too
(ii)
You point out
the weeds grow
are growing
into a telephone wire
A snake-like silhouette
against a bloodshot sky
And in the field
beyond half torn barns
and barbed-wire fences
the roots of an oak tree
reach for the frail river
We hadn't planned
for any hold-outs
or stored away
wheat for fear of
sour land
We waited for
storm clouds
to peak over
the hazy horizon
I felt the last
breath of childhood
leaving me
smelling like rye
bread and a pack
of marlboro reds
(iii)
I once heard a rabbi say
when i walk,
i feel as though
my feet
are praying
so i’ve been praying lately on
the williamsburg bridge
Headed towards clouds
miles away
brooding in a misty mix
of black and blue
A september nightmare
- rain landing on hot asphalt
cracking glass
brief drops of jewels -
the sounds of a new year
Three Recollections on my Encounters with Droughts
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The ground is cracked
because there is no rain in the land;
the farmers are dismayed
and cover their heads.
Even the doe in the field
deserts her newborn fawn
because there is no grass.
Wild donkeys stand on the barren
heights and pant like jackals;
their eyes fail.
Jeremiah 14:4.6
(i.)
Have I ever told you
your eyes
bear a startling
resemblance
to my father’s?
Both pairs remind me
of poker chips and
cactus sap
They remind me of that
western folk-tale
my father used
to tell me
where the singing cowboy
loses his horse
and all his gold
over a bad hand
and a game of
Texas-Holdem
Then the cowboy
goes crazy drinking
cactus juice
He could no longer
afford any water
which was steadily
rising in value
as the ground turned
pitted and black
(ii.)
Of course
even a river village
must suffer through
a drought or two
I remember
last spring
you called to tell me
the Llano river
finally flooded
ending a decade
of decay
I remember the
videos you sent me
that first day
when the
clouds broke
And I remember
the videos you sent me
a week later
when the rain
lingered over
leathery ground
Videos of river
banks bursting
like veins
Shattering roads
barging into homes
carrying cars five miles
down the stream
By the end of the week
twenty-eight were
missing or dead
(iii.)
I can’t imagine
how it felt for
the clouds
to hold in their rain
for so long--
each year heavier
and colder than
the year before
And then to
finally let go?
I bet it felt
like forgiveness.
Like how a
hearth feels
when its splinters
move to spark
and then
spark to resin
and then finally
resin to ash.
Unable to prevent
or perhaps
unconcerned with
destruction that is
inherent in a
letting go
of that size
I don’t know
how the storm felt
but I know that
it left as passively
as a newborn dove
Filling
no
overflowing
for a week
then gone
And I know
that since last
spring
it hasn't
rained once
in the river country